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Friday, September 24, 2010

Poetry Friday: Call for Original Poems

Happy Poetry Friday! I have big news to share.

I am editing a new anthology of poetry for the Maryland Writers Association.

The theme is love, in all its facets. I hope many of you will send original poems. The book should be out for National Poetry Month 2011.

I've already a poet ask whether the theme is intentionally broad. Yes. We're going to think beyond romantic love for this book.

To give you a sense of what "love, in all its facets" means, here is one of my favorite (non-romantic) love poems.

A Blessing

by James Wright

Just off the highway to Rochester, Minnesota,
Twilight bounds softly forth on the grass.
And the eyes of those two Indian ponies
Darken with kindness.
They have come gladly out of the willows
To welcome my friend and me.
We step over the barbed wire into the pasture
Where they have been grazing all day, alone.
They ripple tensely, they can hardly contain their happiness   
That we have come.
They bow shyly as wet swans. They love each other.
There is no loneliness like theirs.   
At home once more,
They begin munching the young tufts of spring in the darkness.   
I would like to hold the slenderer one in my arms,
For she has walked over to me   
And nuzzled my left hand.   


Have a wonderful Friday. The Poetry Friday links are at Karen Edmisten's blog today. Thanks for hosting Karen!

For those of you who'd like to  submit to the MWA poetry anthology, here is the official call for manuscripts:
 
Maryland Writers’ Association

Call for poetry submissions


MWA Books, publisher of New Lines from the Old Line State: An Anthology of Maryland Writers, is seeking submissions from MWA members for its second book, a poetry anthology.

The theme is Love, in all its facets. Laura Shovan, winner of the 2010 Clarinda Harriss Poetry Prize, is editor. MWA members are encouraged to send 1-3 of their best poems on this theme, with a limit of 100 lines per poem, to MWAbooks@marylandwriters.org. All poetic forms will be considered.

Deadline for submissions: October 27, 2010
Notification:  December 15, 2010
Publication Date: National Poetry Month – April, 2011

Email submissions: send an attachment with cover letter and 1-3 poems. In the subject line please write “poetry anthology submission.” In the cover letter: your full name, pen name if applicable, street address, phone number and email address. Also include the title of each poem with line count, and a brief bio (approximately 70 words). The poems should be compiled as one continuous Microsoft Word, Rich Text, or Text file so your submission can be sent as one attachment. Include the poem title and your name in the upper right corner of each page you submit. Only electronic submissions will be considered.

Previously published work will be considered, provided it does not conflict with the original publisher’s reprinting policy and the author retains all reprint rights. Any work restricted by third party copyright will not be accepted. Submitting authors grant MWA and MWA Books permission to publish submitted work; otherwise authors retain existing copyrights.

Simultaneous submissions are permissible. Please contact us immediately if your poem is accepted by another publication.

Poets whose work is selected for publication will receive a copy of the anthology, an author discount on additional copies, and invitations to read at promotional events. Due to the high volume of submissions anticipated, we are unable to respond with specific feedback regarding your poems if you are not selected.

You must be an MWA member in good standing to participate. For more information, to renew your membership, or to join now, visit us at www.marylandwriters.org.

This project is funded by the Mildred Werba Fund, gifted to the MWA for use in supporting poets. MWA thanks the Fund and Werba family for their generosity.
 

Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Fall for Poetry -- Events, Contests, Festivals

Lots of news to share, poetry gang! Here we go:

Sunday, September 26
Laura & Shirley Brewer at the Baltimore Book Festival
POEMS AND GEMS: LETTING IN THE LIGHT - two luminous poets illuminate the writing craft.

4-5 PM in the CityLit Tent
 
The pink is in honor of Shirley. She is fabulous as a person and as a poet. We always have a lot of fun together. Join us and you'll have fun too.
 
Friday, October 1
Deadline
Clarinda Harriss Poetry Prize and Chapbook Competition 2010
Submit 20-25 pages of poetry (and $25)
Prize is $250 and publication. Final judge is Dick Allen.
 
My chapbook, Mountain, Log, Salt and Stone won the inaugural Harriss Prize. I had an amazing experience with CityLit Press. Highly recommended!
 
Tuesday, October 5
Howard County Poetry and Literature Society hosts poet Mark Doty
 
I'm sad to have to miss this one. Doty is a remarkable poet, but he's also a wonderful speaker. You will leave this evening feeling enriched.
 
Thanks to HoCoPoLitSo to bringing national voices to Howard County, MD. Info: www.hocopolitso.org
 
Thursday, October 7 - Sunday, October 10
13th Biennial Geraldine R. Dodge Poetry Festival
New Jersey Performing Arts Center, Newark, NJ
 
If you've never been, do yourself a favor and GO! This is the biggest poetry festival in the nation. It's amazing and Friday is free for teachers. Wow.
 
Info at www.DodgePoetry.org
 
Saturday, October 16 - Sunday, October 17
Women's Poetry Retreat
Harpers Ferry, WV
 
Three of my favorite local poets are leading the retreat: Shirley Brewer, Barbara Morrison and Christine Stewart of the Maryland State Arts Council. For just $99 including lodging and meals, you can't go wrong.
 
Info at http://baltimorewriterscollective.blogspot.com
 
Wednesday, October 27
Deadline: Maryland Writers Association Poetry Anthology
 
The theme is Love, in all its facets.
Members are encouraged to submit 1-3 poems on this theme. Non-members are encouraged to join!
www.marylandwriters.org
 
More exciting news on this anthology in a separate post. I'm very excited to be editing the anthology.
 
 
Monday, November 1
Deadline: Little Patuxent Review
www.littlepatuxentreview.org
 
The next issue's theme is Water.
 
LPR is a beautiful local journal that consistently supports local poets, essayists and fiction writers.
 
Anyone would think it's National Poetry Month! Good luck with your submissions. Get out there and hear some poetry.

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Voice -- I Know It When I Hear It

How many times have you been to a writers' conference and heard an editor or agent say:
Most of all, I'm looking for manuscripts that have a strong voice.

Someone in the audience always asks:
What do you mean, "voice?"

And the editor/agent says . . . I know it when I hear it.

As authors, we get pretty cozy with our characters. Sometimes the lines become blurry. Does that sound like me or my character talking?

This weekend, I had a great visit with the Northern Virginia Writers Club. We did a short writing exercise on voice. I designed this one to help tune authors' ears.

Let's start with a poem by Marge Piercy. This one is part monologue, part character sketch.

My mother gives me her recipe


Take some flour. Oh, I don't know,
like two-three cups, and you cut
in the butter. Now some women
they make it with shortening,
but I say butter, even though
that means you had to have fish, see?


You cut up some apples. Not those
stupid sweet ones. Apples for the cake,
they have to have some bite, you know?
A little sour in the sweet, like love.
You slice them into little moons.
No, no! Like half or crescent
moons. You aren't listening.


You mix sugar and cinnamon and cloves,
some women use allspice, till it's dark
and you stir in the apples. You coat
every little moon. Did I say you add
milk? Oh, just till it feels right.

You can read the rest of the poem at the Writers Almanac.
 
Ponder or discuss.
 
At NoVA Writers, we talked about how the character of the mother is revealed through her speech -- both what she says and how she says it. We decided that this mother probably gives her child advice on everything with this blend of impatience and caring.
 
Now you're warmed up. On to the exercise.
 
1.  Choose a character from your work in progress.
2.  Give him or her a task. It should be something habitual -- work-related, a favorite hobby, a chore.
3.  Choose a second character to watch.
4.  As character one goes through the task, she explains what she's doing and how she's doing it.
 
Take ten minutes to write this as a short monologue. Notice Piercy keeps the second character's voice silent.
 
The NoVA group had a lot of fun with this. Some of the responses were:
 
a young wizard mixing a potion
an old wizard teaching an incantation
a woman dusting her collection of wedding cake toppers
a coach explaining good soccer form
a dog on its walk
 
Here is mystery/thriller author Austin Camacho's fabulous response to the exercise (he wants you to know this is a first draft):
 
You see, dear, it's all about the touch.
 
When you walk up to the mark, he's got to be moving. He stops, you stop. Wait for it. Watch his eyes. There's this moment, this one sweet moment when he's about to stat or stop and he's thinking about what he's doing, and really THINKING, not feeling.
 
THAT'S when you slide up to him. Your eyes are on something else when you touch him. A little bump, right? Not hard, just enough so he feels THAT, not your two fingers slipping into his hip pocket.
 
You can find more of Austin Camacho's work at www.hannibaljonesmysteries.com
 
Many in the NoVA group reported that they didn't know their characters felt this way, or knew how to do the task, until they got writing.
 
Why does this exercise work? As in Piercy's poem, you are asking a character to explain something he or she normally does automatically, without thinking. Forcing her to put into words how she lifts a wallet -- that reveals character.