tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post3089928346121358791..comments2023-10-19T10:51:43.826-04:00Comments on Author Amok: Dark Earth, Cosmic Sky: 2014 Poetry ProjectAuthor Amokhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-41313114432857384972014-02-03T06:54:48.908-05:002014-02-03T06:54:48.908-05:00Thanks, all, for checking out these quick-response...Thanks, all, for checking out these quick-response poems and for leaving a comment. I agree with Linda -- Diane's questions set a beautiful tone, and Margaret's poem is rich with visual imagery.Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-36034907130591690782014-02-02T20:26:56.805-05:002014-02-02T20:26:56.805-05:00This is fun, Laura. I like that feel of the earth ...This is fun, Laura. I like that feel of the earth crumbles, & wonder if chocolate would solve many problems if we let it? Diane, I like your questions, adding definite sadness into the beauty. And Margaret, we never see mist here in Colorado, you've described such a beautiful picture. Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-80291500466305285862014-02-02T15:54:43.250-05:002014-02-02T15:54:43.250-05:00"Calling for spring." brings it all home..."Calling for spring." brings it all home. Lovely, Margaret!Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-51508147044311852462014-02-02T15:47:51.059-05:002014-02-02T15:47:51.059-05:00Here's my poem using bronze mist, cosmic sky, ...Here's my poem using bronze mist, cosmic sky, and sugar coral. <br /><br />The bronze mist lingers over the morning bayou.<br />A great blue heron, <br />hidden in the fog, wades <br />boastful in his grey cloak.<br />He takes flight--winged warrior--<br />rising into a cosmic sky.<br />The sun breaks <br />the horizon into petals<br />of sugar coral, that perfect pink<br />silk tulip drops into an earthen vase<br />Calling for spring.<br /><br />--Margaret Simon<br /><br />Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-81591452932054128412014-02-02T15:40:56.715-05:002014-02-02T15:40:56.715-05:00I really like Diane's line: "let's es...I really like Diane's line: "let's establish a name for the color of the firmament"--nicePatricianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-65309089832878006902014-02-02T14:41:10.041-05:002014-02-02T14:41:10.041-05:00Earthworms and chocolate--how totally unexpected! ...Earthworms and chocolate--how totally unexpected! Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.com