tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post5399420333329089408..comments2023-10-19T10:51:43.826-04:00Comments on Author Amok: HOWL-oween Onomatopoeia PoemsAuthor Amokhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-45066906107330990622014-11-02T07:50:31.098-05:002014-11-02T07:50:31.098-05:00Hi, everyone. I'm so glad you liked the poems!...Hi, everyone. I'm so glad you liked the poems! Apologies about the link. The lesson I posted years ago has been eaten by Blogger. I'll write up the lesson this week -- look for a two-part post with additional student poems.Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-44799898632868229082014-11-02T07:11:06.552-05:002014-11-02T07:11:06.552-05:00Laura, what great fun you must have had with the c...Laura, what great fun you must have had with the children. I was hoping to see the lesson plan as Michelle said so that I could share with the teachers I work with. Can you repost the link please.Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-46414409242186333582014-11-01T17:24:36.912-04:002014-11-01T17:24:36.912-04:00Patrick's poem read like an animated movie scr...Patrick's poem read like an animated movie script. I especially liked "Running fast. Thunk. Ouch!" My experience was a little more like Megan's, though. Especially that part about being in a pound of candy. :) <br /><br />I always love seeing to see what these kids come up with under your tutelage, Laura! Would have been interested in reading more about your lesson plan as well... can you fix the link?Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-39707519370876961962014-11-01T14:47:00.063-04:002014-11-01T14:47:00.063-04:00"Swish, swish, shadows"
What a delightf..."Swish, swish, shadows"<br /><br />What a delightful compilation of Halloween feelings!Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13626451110946889157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-43378430665999124422014-11-01T08:13:35.479-04:002014-11-01T08:13:35.479-04:00You really do get a feeling of movement and excite...You really do get a feeling of movement and excitement with these poems. I like all the stomping, ringing, crunching, whooshing, and swishing. And "sour, sour." Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-60934252644832413752014-10-31T20:09:16.126-04:002014-10-31T20:09:16.126-04:00Love these 3rd grader poems, Laura. I think my fav...Love these 3rd grader poems, Laura. I think my favorite line is:<br />"Crunch crunch crunch rip.<br />I leave a mess on the floor -- oops." =)<br />Bridget Mageehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18185985167366724404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-52587163025087049372014-10-31T15:54:08.436-04:002014-10-31T15:54:08.436-04:00What a perfect starting off poem and what a great ...What a perfect starting off poem and what a great idea to combine onomatopoeia with Halloween! It's always fun to see your students' poems. Liz Steinglasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14614059299412727544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-38342392741477246502014-10-31T14:53:49.221-04:002014-10-31T14:53:49.221-04:00Hehe--I love the drop drop! These are great. Btw, ...Hehe--I love the drop drop! These are great. Btw, there was no link to your complete lesson, which I'd love to see...laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-31563187114643590742014-10-31T13:51:20.217-04:002014-10-31T13:51:20.217-04:00I'm so glad you shared these, Laura! They are ...I'm so glad you shared these, Laura! They are onomato-perfect! Sounds like your 3rd graders had fun.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-77827858383812067832014-10-31T10:05:36.835-04:002014-10-31T10:05:36.835-04:00Wow, such whiz bang poems. Love the energy and imm...Wow, such whiz bang poems. Love the energy and immediacy. Great job third graders!jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859083373087448194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-49195384679416217992014-10-30T21:09:09.091-04:002014-10-30T21:09:09.091-04:00I think these two captured the sounds beautifully,...I think these two captured the sounds beautifully, Laura. Thanks-glad you're having fun! Happy Halloween!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-69297810187899114772014-10-30T15:25:26.864-04:002014-10-30T15:25:26.864-04:00Thanks for the treats 3d grade!Thanks for the treats 3d grade!Patricia VanAmburgnoreply@blogger.com