tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post9043396103024645376..comments2023-10-19T10:51:43.826-04:00Comments on Author Amok: 2015 Sound Poem Project Day 16: Quaking AspenAuthor Amokhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-27556653077183891322015-02-17T08:38:45.123-05:002015-02-17T08:38:45.123-05:00I am not familiar with Aspens quaking. These poems...I am not familiar with Aspens quaking. These poems are so wonderful! I love the imagery, the metaphors, the word play. I need to step up my game for sure! Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-4408417195725538972015-02-16T23:32:34.368-05:002015-02-16T23:32:34.368-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Michael Ratcliffehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02469869423353363535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-75917929589288818792015-02-16T22:30:24.647-05:002015-02-16T22:30:24.647-05:00Hi, Karin! I'll add your poem to the post firs...Hi, Karin! I'll add your poem to the post first thing tomorrow. So glad you're joining us.Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-79973132968882434992015-02-16T22:30:17.184-05:002015-02-16T22:30:17.184-05:00Hi, Karin! I'll add your poem to the post firs...Hi, Karin! I'll add your poem to the post first thing tomorrow. So glad you're joining us.Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-53973835814497922552015-02-16T21:44:26.304-05:002015-02-16T21:44:26.304-05:00I'm going to not be too creative with my respo...I'm going to not be too creative with my response, but say "wow", each one touches the other, and is beautiful alone, too. I tried to choose a favorite stanza, Diane, and do love those birds flying low, but they're all beautiful. Laura, that connection to the sideways petiole and the tango, perfect. Michael, everyone in Colorado would adore your love poem. There is much adoration of the aspen gold here in the autumn. And Patricia, the quickness of your poem equals the shaking of the leaves, & 'shiver trembles me'-such a good ending. Then, Karin is in with a 'what if' - guess that is an end, "single leaf silence". Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-84439374543692919452015-02-16T21:39:33.393-05:002015-02-16T21:39:33.393-05:00All treats! A grand showing for today.All treats! A grand showing for today.Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-78819350773771570112015-02-16T20:44:15.695-05:002015-02-16T20:44:15.695-05:00:) Karin:) KarinAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-50838072571325885732015-02-16T20:42:53.076-05:002015-02-16T20:42:53.076-05:00Hi, I'm joining in!
Quaking Aspen Sound Haik...Hi, I'm joining in!<br /><br /><br />Quaking Aspen Sound Haiku<br /><br /><br />green, the aspen cheered<br /><br />yellow glory lands, leaving<br /><br />single leaf silence<br /><br /><br />Karin Fisher-Goltonhttp://karinfisher-golton.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-86507180638318331982015-02-16T20:42:27.740-05:002015-02-16T20:42:27.740-05:00Really enoying today's imagery and sound effec...Really enoying today's imagery and sound effects: shirts a d skirts Diane; breath of breeze Laura; aching hearts and castanets Michael; shushing rattles Linda. Thanks to all from PatriciaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com