tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post3011788922448486558..comments2023-10-19T10:51:43.826-04:00Comments on Author Amok: A (True) Ghost StoryAuthor Amokhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-73039352234662197572013-11-03T09:21:57.623-05:002013-11-03T09:21:57.623-05:00A really weird experience, and well used in this c...A really weird experience, and well used in this context!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-3346214801638101682013-11-02T11:35:27.368-04:002013-11-02T11:35:27.368-04:00Spooky and gorgeous, Laura. Love the mood and rhym...Spooky and gorgeous, Laura. Love the mood and rhyme scheme and clever rhymes themselves. I can relate to this - I'm sure the house I grew up in was haunted, and I KNOW the summer theater I worked in was. Shudder.Renee LaTulippehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13520719663052253627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-90601245368306534152013-11-01T14:08:02.179-04:002013-11-01T14:08:02.179-04:00I enjoy your poem. It reminded me of an old house...I enjoy your poem. It reminded me of an old house we bought. It had an unheated front porch. A few days after we moved in, ice crystals formed on one of the window panes. The ice looked just like an old man (the one who died in the house)was peering in.<br />Dorishttp://doriskstone.weebly.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-34444828425408752322013-11-01T13:50:22.466-04:002013-11-01T13:50:22.466-04:00I believe, I believe This is wonderfully spooky!I believe, I believe This is wonderfully spooky!Joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00633484787634197878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-39297801759585653042013-11-01T09:41:53.974-04:002013-11-01T09:41:53.974-04:00I love this poem! And I love that it was a real st...I love this poem! And I love that it was a real story :) You constantly amaze me with your talents!!Veronica Bartleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04452926814324819692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-91148691698659713192013-10-31T21:51:51.378-04:002013-10-31T21:51:51.378-04:00Very spooky--and a good rhyme, too!Very spooky--and a good rhyme, too!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-13496210027055084042013-10-31T20:06:12.827-04:002013-10-31T20:06:12.827-04:00Just right, Laura. I stayed in one of our Colorad...Just right, Laura. I stayed in one of our Colorado haunted hotels with my students. The hotel even had a notebook of what sightings in which rooms! Some students were not amused & claimed they didn't sleep a wink! Great poem, wouldn't it be something to see that shimmer? Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-68795127519022089432013-10-31T13:21:55.296-04:002013-10-31T13:21:55.296-04:00Very creepy and I love the triple rhymes - that...Very creepy and I love the triple rhymes - that's hard to pull off and you did it well, and told a great story too. Nice work, Laura!Carrie Fhttp://storypatch.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-11782562567747169762013-10-31T12:40:27.186-04:002013-10-31T12:40:27.186-04:00I so enjoyed this poem inspired by the other side!...I so enjoyed this poem inspired by the other side! Well done to both you and your ghostly muse. (Those Williamsburg photos are pretty freaky.)Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-46408880000447189902013-10-31T12:06:37.397-04:002013-10-31T12:06:37.397-04:00This is a great Halloween story!This is a great Halloween story!Kirsti Callhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10481134344365131022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-85427082971045838172013-10-31T11:25:53.602-04:002013-10-31T11:25:53.602-04:00I'm so glad that this poem is spooking everyon...I'm so glad that this poem is spooking everyone, so we can enjoy the tingling fears together. FYI readers -- there's a MG book giveaway on my new post. Check it out!Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-70059709831123854102013-10-31T11:04:27.760-04:002013-10-31T11:04:27.760-04:00What a creepy scene. I'm glad I'm reading...What a creepy scene. I'm glad I'm reading this in the morning!JannaTWriteshttp://jannatwrites.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-32390013353124529222013-10-31T10:30:19.969-04:002013-10-31T10:30:19.969-04:00A great poem that tells a great story!A great poem that tells a great story!Mike Allegrahttp://www.mikeallegra.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-73791529085706968342013-10-31T02:28:39.001-04:002013-10-31T02:28:39.001-04:00Very eerie. Like I need to find a funny Halloweens...Very eerie. Like I need to find a funny Halloweensie story so I can go to bed eerie!Stacy S. Jensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09646270238659432058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-84552604856455402932013-10-30T22:50:31.015-04:002013-10-30T22:50:31.015-04:00Deliciously spooky and eerie -- and so well writte...Deliciously spooky and eerie -- and so well written! Shiveringly fascinating to know it's based on a real occurrence. So glad you joined us in the contest. Beth Stilbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10599767764125204077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-59659412258362933932013-10-30T20:59:05.507-04:002013-10-30T20:59:05.507-04:00What a wonderfully spooky story in such lovely poe...What a wonderfully spooky story in such lovely poetry!Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-37523953269786622052013-10-30T19:02:10.267-04:002013-10-30T19:02:10.267-04:00Wonderfully spooky! I really enjoyed reading it.Wonderfully spooky! I really enjoyed reading it.Penny Parker Klostermannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043861965501388155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-61456778603940242222013-10-30T16:38:59.884-04:002013-10-30T16:38:59.884-04:00Susanna -- thanks again for a great prompt! I hadn...Susanna -- thanks again for a great prompt! I hadn't realized that I wanted to write about this.Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-83870526616500876152013-10-30T16:38:14.201-04:002013-10-30T16:38:14.201-04:00Thanks, Vivian, Donna and Cheryl!
Jackie -- I hop...Thanks, Vivian, Donna and Cheryl!<br /><br />Jackie -- I hope you followed the link to view that spooky photo I took in Williamsburg.<br /><br />Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-57089319319366949942013-10-30T16:37:02.315-04:002013-10-30T16:37:02.315-04:00Thanks for the kind words, everyone. It's grea...Thanks for the kind words, everyone. It's great to have so many visitors stopping by from the Halloweensies gang. Kerry, we'll have to talk!Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-5646491178400462672013-10-30T15:51:39.738-04:002013-10-30T15:51:39.738-04:00Wow! This is truly spooky! Even more so because ...Wow! This is truly spooky! Even more so because it really happened! And so beautifully written!!! I'm so glad you found the contest and entered! Thanks for joining in!Susanna Leonard Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-43036541293213742512013-10-30T15:46:17.172-04:002013-10-30T15:46:17.172-04:00I loved this. I am familiar with Jamestown since I...I loved this. I am familiar with Jamestown since I once lived in the seven cities. Thanks for sharing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08513112351946721180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-83388002474042743922013-10-30T15:00:27.565-04:002013-10-30T15:00:27.565-04:00Oh, wow, Laura. This IS spooky! Love the poem. Exc...Oh, wow, Laura. This IS spooky! Love the poem. Excellent job!Cheryl Secombhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07407386826345621977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-10501331542545105312013-10-30T14:26:42.775-04:002013-10-30T14:26:42.775-04:00I believe this poem is terrific!I believe this poem is terrific!Donna L Saddhttp://donnalsadd.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8303906221917588052.post-10325057859134625912013-10-30T14:12:05.416-04:002013-10-30T14:12:05.416-04:00I'm putting on my hat - so that I can take it ...I'm putting on my hat - so that I can take it off to you, Laura! Oh my goodness - this story is fantastic...meter perfect...terrific subject---great tension...beautiful language. I'm thrilled to meet you via Susanna's Halloweensie Contest.:)Vivian Kirkfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16712957075467564382noreply@blogger.com