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Friends, it’s Day 8 of the Pantone® Poetry Project. For me, the process of
writing in response to a color every day is getting a little harder.
Pantone® colors aren't just for fashion. We are writing in response to designer colors every day in February. Read more about the project here. |
From Pantone's ®Fashion Color Report webpage. |
I hit a
similar wall last year, during the Poetry Postcard Project. That was fine. At
least, I had to tell myself it was fine. Writing every day means that not every
poem is going to be an inspired, amazing, lyrical wonder. Last year, I ended up
writing plenty of light verse -- some fun, some just ugh -- and a handful of poems I’m very proud of.
When you’re
stuck, it’s good to mix things up by trying a different form. Both
Diane Mayr (Random Noodling) and I did that today.
The Day 8
colors are:
Day 8: Peach Pearl Pantone ® 14-1419 |
Day 8: MeteoritePantone ® 19-4008 |
Diane and
I both picked Meteorite to inspire our writing. Instead of writing a poem, though,
Diane created a short play and I wrote a prose piece.
Meteorite (A Play
in One Act)
It is just after sunset, the sky darkens. Two ants stand at the entrance to their hill gazing upward.
From nearby, a loud "Plop."
YOUNGSTER
Daddy, Daddy!
A meteorite--it
fell from above!
FATHER
Where son?
YOUNGSTER
Over there, Daddy!
See it? It's
burning hot!
FATHER
Yes, my boy.
I see it. Stand back!
YOUNGSTER
Do you think it's
from a distant star,
or a faraway planet?
FATHER
Definitely a planet.
YOUNGSTER
Really? Which one?
FATHER
The planet Cow!
Diane Mayr, all rights reserved.
It is just after sunset, the sky darkens. Two ants stand at the entrance to their hill gazing upward.
From nearby, a loud "Plop."
YOUNGSTER
Daddy, Daddy!
A meteorite--it
fell from above!
FATHER
Where son?
YOUNGSTER
Over there, Daddy!
See it? It's
burning hot!
FATHER
Yes, my boy.
I see it. Stand back!
YOUNGSTER
Do you think it's
from a distant star,
or a faraway planet?
FATHER
Definitely a planet.
YOUNGSTER
Really? Which one?
FATHER
The planet Cow!
Diane Mayr, all rights reserved.
Pregnant cow at University of Maryland Research Farm by J. Shovan |
Meteorite
by Laura Shovan
by Laura Shovan
It took me three months, but I finally got brave and painted
my toenails black. The color’s called “Meteorite.” It freaks my mother out and
my friend Henry said it was morbid, but he wasn’t dumped by somebody he went
out with our entire sophomore year. Henry was one of the only kids who stuck by
me after the break up. Maybe because we survived Hebrew School together when we
were 12. Anyway, I’ve got reasons to be morbid.
Yes, I have a new boyfriend and yes he’s awesome, so I don’t totally
understand why I want to wear black all the time. I just know that I do. It
feels like being under. A heavy feeling. But it’s also a darkness thing, because
the color, “Meteorite,” is like when the sky is dark and I know there’s a comet
out there somewhere, the kind people wish on, but I can’t see it. That comet is
always in the part of the sky where I’m not looking. It’s this huge metaphor
for my life as a high school junior. My life is happening out of the corner of
my eye. I never turn my head in time to see hope fizzing across the blackness.
I just see the blackness.
All the regular old stars stand around where they always do,
unchanging as every one of the 333 kids in my high school class. Unchanging as
I am, even with the awesome new boyfriend. And here is me, wondering why this
new guy, this nice guy, wants to be with a depressed, black-toenailed loser. Sometimes
I crawl out my window and stretch out on the roof of the garage, where I can
look at the sky and ask myself these questions.
Wikipedia's Nail Art page |
UPDATE!
Linda Baie of Teacher Dance is in with a late Peach Pearl quatrain. Thanks, Linda!
Grandama christened me her 'sweetest peach';
Grandpa called me his 'little pearl'.
I gew up know I was a favorite,
their precious "peach pearl" of a little girl!
Linda Baie ©All Rights Reserved
If you'd like more information about this month's writing project, read the introductory post. You can start at the beginning (February 1: Apricot Illusion), or jump in tomorrow with these two colors:
Day 9: Wet WeatherPantone ® 16-5101 |
Day 9: Aqua HazePantone ® 15-5209 |
Great voice in this, Laura! Is it going to be part of a longer piece?
ReplyDeleteI nominated you for a Sunshine Award! You can see the details here: http://thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com/2014/02/sunshine.html
ReplyDeleteNo pressure if you don't want to participate. But your blog does always bring sunshine into my day. :-)
Sorry that I could not pink pearl anything. If tomorrow is still wet weather, I have this:
ReplyDeleteWet weather lashes
mascara into cheeky
silt and salt puddles.
Love that fun end to Diane's 'play'-surprises are everywhere! And the voice in yours, Laura. High school kids are both energetic and then bored in the blink of an eye! I like "My life is happening out of the corner of my eye." They're looking in a mirror always, aren't they?
ReplyDeleteFinally a little time for this, Laura. Here's mine for today:
ReplyDeleteGrandma christened me her ‘sweetest peach’;
Grandpa called me his ‘little pearl’.
I grew up knowing I was a favorite,
their precious “peach pearl” of a little girl!
Linda Baie ©All Rights Reserved
Hi, Ruth. Thanks! You're my second sunshine nominator. I appreciate it. With this project going on, I might not get to it, but if I do -- it could be perfect for the Amberglow/ Gold Glow on Tuesday.
ReplyDeleteDiane -- I may save this character sketch for later, but it's not for my current WIP. Thanks for the compliment!
ReplyDelete