A few weeks ago, I caught my twelve-year-old out of bed near midnight. She was sitting in the hallway. "What are you doing?" I asked.
"I was sleeping and I had an idea for a poem I'm working on," she said. "It's dark in my room, so I came out in the hallway to write it down."
"Carry on," I said, "but then straight to bed." In the morning, we talked about how many writers keep a notebook at their bedsides for just this reason. The dream or semi-wakeful state is a time when ideas we have been grasping at during the conscious day come floating into our minds.
Today, Maryland poet Allan Roy Andrews shares a poem about the compelling lines of verse that come to us in dreams. Scroll to the bottom for a related prompt.
Dream Muse
by Allan Roy Andrews
I seek the diction for my poem
and lonely as a cloud I roam
the pages of anthologies;
but finding there no words to please,
I gentle go to that good night
and in my dancing dream I write
a poem as clear as ear has heard
then wake--and can’t recall a word.
Posted with permission.
Your Tuesday Prompt:
In "Dream Muse," Allan Roy Andrews incorporates phrases from famous poems (Wordsworth's "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud" and Thomas' "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night") into an original poem.
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Choose two well-known poems that you admire. From each, select a line or phrase. Do some free-writing, incorporating the two phrases. Don't edit. Invite whatever floats into your mind onto the page.
If you want to take this practice a step further, read the two famous poems before you go to bed. Be sure to leave a notebook or paper and pen at your bedside. If an idea or a line bubbles up in the night, or as you are waking, write it down.
Tomorrow's guest poet is Justine Rowden. See you then!
I like a poem with borrowings and dreams. But that "carry on" to the daughter in the night" -- love it!
ReplyDeleteHi, Jeannine. I agree -- it's a great prompt. It's a risk to borrow from a famous poem, but Allan handles incorporating those lines into his original piece so beautifully.
ReplyDeleteMy 'tween is a creative soul. TBD if she will focus on writing or music or whatever. I love watching her explore.
Laura, I love Allan's poem and I cannot wait to try this prompt. How cool to have a daughter sitting up in the hallway in the middle of the night, writing a poem. Carry on, indeed.
ReplyDeleteI love how the final line draws the whole poem together. We've all been there.
ReplyDeleteChiming in on loving the "Carry on."
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed Allan's poem, especially the "dancing dream." :)