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Showing posts with label poetry prompt. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry prompt. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 1, 2015

NPM 2015: What Are You Wearing, Jane Elkin?


Find the official NPM 2015 poster
at the Academy of American Poets
At last! It's finally here -- that special season that we wait all year to celebrate.

It's National Poetry Month. 

If National Poetry Month were a party (it kind of is), what would you wear to the celebration? All this month, guest bloggers are putting on their finery here at Author Amok. We're doing a month-long feature on poetry about clothes. In addition to the guest posts, every Friday in April I'll post a round-up of original clothing poems. (Send those via email to laurashovan at gmail dot com or leave them in the comments). You'll find a writing prompt at the bottom of this post.

Why clothes?

Articles of clothing are symbolic. They represent choices people make about how they want to be viewed by others. But they can also represent a person's economic situation, relationship with gender, mood, and culture. A red tie or jacket can be a metaphor for strength.

From popular song, we have Prince's "Raspberry Beret," Elvis' "Blue Suede Shoes," and Nancy Sinatra's walking boots. But what about poetry?

Meet today's guest blogger, poet Jane Elkin. Jane has visited Author Amok several times, including when her book WORLD CLASS: POEMS INSPIRED BY THE ESL CLASSROOM was published in 2014. (Read the post here.)



The Parable of the Hangers
 by Jane Elkin

“If there were a fire and you had time to grab only one thing,” my roommate asks, “what would it be? Photos? Love letters? Your thesis?”
            A reasonable person might point out that if there were indeed a fire, they wouldn’t pause for any of those things, but not me.
            “You wouldn’t believe me if I told you,” I say. And with that one question, I am transported back to childhood.

My closet was full of someone else’s clothes. When I’d gone down for my nap, it held my brothers’ cast-offs and three cotton dresses. Now it was packed with girly surprises: a pink rosebud here, a lemon sash there, poufy dotted Swiss sleeves, and silken strawberries on chiffon. Scotty dogs walked the plaid field of a jumper and I swore I heard bagpipes. It was a whole rack of whimsy in thread. It was more clothes than I knew existed. It was the most beautiful sight of all my four years. It was Christmas in August.
            I had been living some other girl’s life in my primary colored play clothes. I was born for Sunday best, and now it appeared I would wear it every day. 
            My mother stood in the door frame, smiling mischievously. “Did you have a good nap?”
            “Mmm hmm.” I pointed. “What are those dresses doing in my closet?”
            “You’re starting kindergarten next week, so you need school clothes, right?”
            Really? I was going to school like my brothers? I had only begged because I was bored. Had I known it involved a makeover, I’d have asked sooner.
             “I’m going to school – in those pretty dresses? Where did they come from?”        
            “From Patty. They’re like new.”
             Patty was an only child with a charmed life –pretty clothes, piano lessons, a puppy. It didn’t matter what things cost because she was a lonely child and her father was a mailman who made a lot of money for not much work. But she was as nice as could be, not at all spoiled. And now her clothes would charm my life, too.
            I sock-skated to the closet and stroked a satin bow.
            “They’re so pretty.” I fingered the hem with the embroidered Scotty dogs. “Thank you!”
            “Here,” my mother said, setting a footstool in front of the closet, “you can take them down by yourself.” I slipped the jumper off the hanger to try it on and went to admire myself in my parents’ full-length mirror, turning to see myself from every angle and bouncing on tip-toe with excitement. I looked older and fancier, like I belonged in the Sears catalog.
            “Of course, now that you’re old enough to dress yourself for school, you’re old enough to learn how to take care of nice clothes, and the best way to do that is to hang them back up right after school.”
            Of course. There had to be a catch. Still, half a day in dresses was better than none.          
            “I’ll take care of them,” I vowed.
            “You have two choices,” my mother said. Some people hang them with all the hooks open to the back, like this.” She motioned to the hangers she’d arranged, all aligned in the same direction. “And other people hang them open to the front, like this.” She turned several to illustrate. “Pick one way or the other, but not both.”
            “Why not?”
            “Well, for one thing, it looks better if they all face the same way,” she began, “but that’s not the most important reason. I’ll show you why.” She flipped every other hanger in alternating directions, talking as she worked.
            “You see, there was once a lady with a whole closet full of beautiful clothes. She had a different outfit for each day and enough dresses to last a month of Sundays: short ones and long ones, silky gowns and woolen suits, sun dresses, party dresses, and even a fur coat – all from the best stores.”
            “Was she a movie star?”
            “Something like that. She had all these beautiful clothes, but she was careless with them. She was always in a hurry, so she had hung them up all haphazard with some of the hangers facing to the front and others facing to the back. Then one day there was a fire.”
            “Ahhh!” I felt sick with dread.
            “She ran to her closet to save her beautiful wardrobe, but when she gathered an armful and tried to run, they held tight to the bar.” My mother locked her arms around the lot and tugged, but the hangers wouldn’t budge.
            “She didn’t have time to turn them around, so she had to run out of the building without any of her nice things, and they all burned up in the fire.”                                 
            “That’s awful,” I gasped. “She wasn’t very smart.” I climbed atop the stool and got to work. “I’m keeping my hangers open to the back, like you had them.”

I’m still an open-to-the-back girl, as are my grown daughters, but I never told them why. Some legacies are too weird to explain. You just do them.

Jane is pairing her remembrances with two poems. In both, clothing becomes a metaphor for the parent/child relationship. The first, by Mark Irwin, begins with a closet.

My Father's Hats

by Mark Irwin

     Sunday mornings I would reach
high into his dark closet while standing
     on a chair and tiptoeing reach
higher, touching, sometimes fumbling
     the soft crowns and imagine
I was in a forest, wind hymning
     through pines, where the musky scent
of rain clinging to damp earth was
     his scent I loved, lingering on
bands, leather, and on the inner silk
     crowns


Read the rest at Poetry 180.

Jane's second featured poem is by YA author and poet Ron Koertge.

Negative Space
by Ron Koertge

My dad taught me to pack: lay out everything. Put back half. Roll things
that roll. Wrinkle-prone things on top of cotton things. Then pants, waist-
to-hem. Nooks and crannies for socks. Belts around the sides like snakes.
Plastic over that. Add shoes. Wear heavy stuff on the plane.
   We started when I was little. I'd roll up socks. Then he'd pretend to put me
in the suitcase, and we'd laugh. Some guys bond with their dads shooting
hoops or talking about Chevrolets. We did it over luggage.

Read the rest at The Writer's Almanac.

Jane Elkin is the founder and facilitator of The Broadneck Writers’ Workshop, as well as a theater critic and essayist for the Bay Weekly. Her prose and poetry have appeared in such journals as Kestrel, Kansas City Voices, Off the Coast andDucts, and she has won awards with the Maryland Writers’ Association, Poetry Matters, and the Poetry Society of New Hampshire. A self-proclaimed Renaissance Woman, she works as a language teacher, singer, and handwriting analyst.

Next up in this series:
Friday 4/3
Tabatha Yeatts is visiting with a clothing poem by Greg Pincus.

*Your suggested clothing poem prompt for Friday, April 3: Storage.
Where and how do you keep your clothes? Do they hang in your closet, organized by color? Are they crumpled on the bedroom floor? Are you an organized packer, or do you toss things into a suitcase and hope for the best. I still remember the name of the long-ago camp counselor (Janice) who taught us how to roll our clothes up tight to maximize space.

Send your poems any time. I'll post original work on Friday.

Tuesday, February 24, 2015

2015 Sound Poem Project Day 24: Sea Turtle

It’s Day 24 of Author Amok's 2015 poem-a-day project. We are spending February writing in response to sounds.  

For a full description of the project and how to participate, please read this post. I hope you'll join us. I'll continue posting poems from Day 24 as they come in. Thanks to everyone who has sent in poems so far.

Put on  your scuba gear, poets. We're heading under the sea today.

Our Day 24 prompt is a sea turtle.

The Green Sea Turtle:  Chelonia mydas
From Jacob's Jungle
I'm going to go first and get it over with today. This was a sound I struggled with, so instead of playing with the burbling water sounds, I went to Rhymezone.com and looked up rhyming words for tortoise. I shoved as many rhyming and near-rhyme words as I could into my poem.

Tortoise
by Laura Shovan

Your chorus is cautious.
Hidden in a flawless
coral forest, sound orbits
in vortices of porous ocean.
Down here, life’s a circus
of gorgeous creatures: porpoise,
walrus, enormous orcas.
Your carapace has one purpose:
lonely fortress.

Karin Fisher-Golton is also thinking about all of the gorgeous creatures that live (normally) out of human sight.

The Underwater Way
by Karin Fisher-Golton

Undersea sounds—
soothing splashes
babbling bubbles
rhythmic wash.

How in the midst
of this aquatic lullaby
can there co-exist
a fish eat fish world?

The underwater citizens
confine their violence
to a snap
             then quickly resume
their peaceful flow.

Diane Mayr is taking a break from the 50+ inches of snow up north to vacation (in her mind). I'm glad she's giving the tortoise some company.

winter break...
me and the green turtle
in a green sea

Our turtle wasn't so sure he wanted a scuba diver with a camera and microphone in his face, as Linda Baie observed.

         Nap Interrupted

A turtle naps. It’s slow to go,
while fishes make a moving show.

Danger near, eyes open wide,     
Flipper moves, away it glides.

Linda Baie © All Rights Reserved

Patricia VanAmburg also lets the tortoise make a getaway. Great use of title here, Patricia!

Bubble Maker
by Patricia VanAmburg

no ordinary aquarium
this blue-green world
of the periscope-eyed
turtle-shell scuba in
submerged getaway

The opening line of Charles Waters poem captures the sound we heard today. Great use of onomatopoeia.

GREEN TURTLE

Sounds of gulping drizzle
Leave loggerhead impervious
As fishes nibble his algae coated
Shell for their morning meal. 

(c) Charles Waters 2015 all rights reserved.

We're almost at the finish line, poets! Keep swimming...



Here are all of the sound prompts for the last week of February. Remember, there will be a prize for our most prolific poet.

Footsteps in snow

Smoke on the Water

Sea Turtle


Choose a train sound. Thanks to Myra of Gathering Books for the suggestion!

Suggested by Jennifer Lewis.


Sunday, March 1: Project Wrap-up

If you'd like some poem-starters to wake up your muse, you'll find them at the bottom of this post. Drop in any time with a poem. I’ll continue to post your work throughout the month, no matter which sound you are writing in response to.

Would you like to read what we’ve written so far? Here are links to the week 3 poems. Each of these posts links to the week 1 and 2 poems.

Santa Fe Church Bells Poems by Linda Baie, Patricia VanAmburg, Diane Mayr, Laura Shovan, and Charles Waters.

Quaking Aspen Poems by Diane Mayr, Charles Waters, Laura Shovan, Patricia VanAmburg, Mike Ratcliffe, and Karin Fisher-Golton.

Tuesday, February 17 -- new poem!
Laughing Child Poems by Charles Waters, Diane Mayr, Laura Shovan, Michael Ratcliffe, Linda Baie, Margaret Simon, and Heidi Mordhorst.

Mysterious Space Sound Poems by Patricia VanAmburg, Charles Waters, Mike Ratcliffe, Laura Shovan, Linda Baie, Michelle Heidenrich Barnes, and Margaret Simon.

Museum Stairwell Poems by Linda Baie, Mike Ratcliffe, Laura Shovan, Charles Waters, Margaret Simon, Diane Mayr, Patricia VanAmburg, and Karin Fisher-Golton.

Friday, February 20 -- new poems!
Reptile Poems by Linda Baie, Patricia VanAmburg, Margaret Simon, Laura Shovan, Mike Ratcliffe, Donna Smith, Robyn Hood Black, Buffy Silverman, and Charles Waters.

Traditional Chinese Music Poems by Diane Mayr, Mike Ratcliffe, Laura Shovan, Robyn Hood Black, Linda Baie, Patricia VanAmburg, Carol Varsalona, Charles Waters, and Margaret Simon.

2015 Sound Poem Project Day 23: Heavy Metal

It’s Day 23 of Author Amok's 2015 poem-a-day project. We are spending February writing in response to sounds.  

For a full description of the project and how to participate, please read this post. I hope you'll join us. I'll continue posting poems from Day 23 as they come in. Thanks to everyone who has sent in poems so far.

Poet Heidi Mordhorst suggested today's sound clip. In her words: "I'd be very inclined to include a few heart-grabbing, bum-shaking riffs from the classical greats to the rock n roll standards." One of the bum-shaking riffs Heidi recommended was ...

our Day 23 prompt, the opening of "Smoke on the Water" by Deep Purple.


Sitting in the upper tiers of a rock concert, we might encounter some second-hand smoke. Be forewarned, today's poems get a little trippy and may not be for younger readers.

One of my favorite current songs is "The Bones of You," by the British band Elbow. The whole concept of the song is how hearing a thread of melody can trigger memories of a time, a place, a person.

Here is Linda Baie's offering on that theme.

         When I hear it…

Inside I ignore
my reliving those days.
I really don’t wish to explore.

The beat thrums a song,
brings the earliest ways
of rockin’ as we rolled along.

The spark of the rave
ignites riffs of the dance
to pulsing Deep Purple in waves.

I wish something new.
Not the old notes replayed,
yet ever still thinking of you.

Linda Baie © All Rights Reserved

The opening of "Smoke on the Water" is working on Mike Ratcliffe's memories too. See Mike's website for a little bit more background on his poem.

Smoke on the Water on the Brain
by Mike Ratcliffe

What is it about those notes?
They are stuck on my mind.
Simple notes to start the song,
’bout as basic as you’ll find.

Takes me back to junior high
in the nineteen seventies.
Years that I’d like to forget,
but these notes won’t let me.

Smoke on the water,
I rarely hear it played.
Cuz I only listen
to Indie rock these days.

Margaret Simon has invited us all to a mini-concert. Here is her poem, embedded in a video of her nephew Jack playing Djembe. Rock out!


Diane Mayr's poem reminded me of when my kids were little. In the car, I would put on classic rock stations and they had to guess the band. If they couldn't recognize AC/DC, Led Zeppelin, The Ramones, or Van  Halen, I  was horrified. Their education was incomplete!

Game Show
by Diane Mayr

A child of the early
days of television
I often find myself
a contestant of the
in-my-own-head
"Name That Tune."
I can name a tune
in two or three notes.

$30 was a big prize
when we played
along in front of
the old black and
white RCA console.
Today my prize is
infinitely larger--
my memory, if not

my mind, is intact.

I like the way that Patricia VanAmburg dropped a little modern reference into her Deep Purple poem.

Contact High
by Patricia VanAmburg

smoke on the water
fifty shades of grey
hair on my neck
soft like the sixties
inhaling in motion
riding each ripple
infinite breaths 

I went in the opposite direction, with a 20th century reference. I learned that the name "Deep Purple" came from a dance-hall tune of the 1930s (source). I used a stanza of that song's lyrics to structure my poem.

Deep Purple
by Laura Shovan

When deep notes sweep across the roaring stadium
and the fog machine softens the edges of the stage
in the blue spotlights, we are teenagers again,
singing "Smoke on the Water" until our voices are a memory.


When the deep purple falls over sleepy garden walls
And the stars begin to twinkle in the sky—
In the mist of a memory you wander back to me
Breathing my name with a sigh...


I like Charles Waters' focus on the name of the song, "Smoke on the Water," for his poem today.

NATURE’S MAGIC TRICK
Spiraled vapors levitate
From rainwaters bed –
Disappearing into ether.

(c) Charles Waters 2015 all rights reserved.

Carol Varsalona at Beyond LiteracyLink has been blogging alongside us, trying out some of the sound prompts. She gave me permission to post her poem today, but you can also read it at Beyond LiteracyLink.

Movement to the beat-
fast, lively, full of heat,
sweet rhythm for my dancing feet.

Music picks up-deep and strong,
for life's dance, no right or wrong
when mixing with a clapping throng.

Sway and step to swinging sound.
Listen for those hearts that pound 
and fill the space with joy that's found. 

Come along. Sweep the world with me.
Dance to the tune of possibility
opening doors to let spirits free.

Finally, that bum-shaking, heart-grabbing music-lover Heidi Mordhorst has a poem for us.

Smoke on the Water
by Heidi Mordhorst

the music came first.
you play that game too:
radio’s on, song so familiar now
you can sense the seed of it,
where it started—
maybe the hook, the title, the bridge,
the wordless shouting chorus.

this time it’s the rattlesome high-hat
shimmering above six or seven
dirty buzzing chords, just like
the roar of dirty river water rising,
climbing the banks carrying
rowboats, dogs and trikes.

pick-up truck
crashes into
a fuel tank
and the flames
flare up,
dirty black smoke
on dirty water,

oily fire
in orange
sky.
the music
came
first.


And here, with another take on music and memory, is Elbow's song "The Bones of You." Enjoy!


We're almost at the finish line, poets!

Here are all of the sound prompts for the last week of February. Remember, there will be a prize for our most prolific poet.

Footsteps in snow

Smoke on the Water



Choose a train sound. Thanks to Myra of Gathering Books for the suggestion!

Suggested by Jennifer Lewis.


Sunday, March 1: Project Wrap-up

If you'd like some poem-starters to wake up your muse, you'll find them at the bottom of this post. Drop in any time with a poem. I’ll continue to post your work throughout the month, no matter which sound you are writing in response to.

Would you like to read what we’ve written so far? Here are links to the week 3 poems. Each of these posts links to the week 1 and 2 poems.

Santa Fe Church Bells Poems by Linda Baie, Patricia VanAmburg, Diane Mayr, Laura Shovan, and Charles Waters.

Quaking Aspen Poems by Diane Mayr, Charles Waters, Laura Shovan, Patricia VanAmburg, Mike Ratcliffe, and Karin Fisher-Golton.

Tuesday, February 17 -- new poem!
Laughing Child Poems by Charles Waters, Diane Mayr, Laura Shovan, Michael Ratcliffe, Linda Baie, Margaret Simon, and Heidi Mordhorst.

Mysterious Space Sound Poems by Patricia VanAmburg, Charles Waters, Mike Ratcliffe, Laura Shovan, Linda Baie, Michelle Heidenrich Barnes, and Margaret Simon.

Museum Stairwell Poems by Linda Baie, Mike Ratcliffe, Laura Shovan, Charles Waters, Margaret Simon, Diane Mayr, Patricia VanAmburg, and Karin Fisher-Golton.

Friday, February 20 -- new poems!
Reptile Poems by Linda Baie, Patricia VanAmburg, Margaret Simon, Laura Shovan, Mike Ratcliffe, Donna Smith, Robyn Hood Black, Buffy Silverman, and Charles Waters.

Traditional Chinese Music Poems by Diane Mayr, Mike Ratcliffe, Laura Shovan, Robyn Hood Black, Linda Baie, Patricia VanAmburg, Carol Varsalona, Charles Waters, and Margaret Simon.