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Visit this post for a full description of the project, including sample writing prompts and instructions on how to share your colorful responses.
Officially, today's color is Jazzy. This is a color with BIG personality, well-suited for my brother's birthday celebration.
Day 6: Kombu Green Pantone ® 19-0417 |
Day 6: Sugar Coral Pantone ® 16-1640 |
Christmas Cactus
Sugar sculpture of fish and coral crashing
Papaya?
MOSS
Pink Ladies, Cape May
And then, a very Sugar Coral memory bubbled up from a long ago trip to Hawaii. I was really surprised where this poem took me.
Guavas
by Laura Shovan
We
came upon them in the wild.
I
was all like, “Eat of the fruit.”
And
he knew me, this new husband,
and
would not eat. We sat on rocks
near
a stream and I bit into the fruit,
its
innards sugar coral, its seeds
in
jellied pouches, like reptile eggs.
“See?”
I said. “It’s good. It’s fine.”
But
still he would not eat.
The
trees were dark as seaweed,
kombu
green. We were oceans
away
from home, married two days,
maybe
three. I pulled off my clothes
and
slipped into the water,
which
had come down
from
the tip of a volcano.
I
was all like, “It’s fine.
A little
cold. Come in.”
I
may have splashed him, playfully.
He
sat on the rocks, my husband,
thinking
he could still refuse,
thinking
he could change the story.
Poet Patricia VanAmburg's amorous couple was inspired by the same color (Sugar Coral), but has a few less issues than the newlyweds in my poem.
Sweet Tarts
by Patricia VanAmburg
Pinky called Coral Sugar
Because she was his dish
Coral called Pinky Sugar when
Ever he granted her wish
Pinky and Coral spooning
Under a sugary moon
Their rendezvous ballooning
Into the late afternoon
Tabatha Yeatts (The Opposite of Indifference) has this meditation on one of today's colors as a symbol of writer's block.
Writer's block is kombu green,
or maybe white, or in between,
with a dash of crumple
wadded up in a bin,
and just enough room
for your brain to get in.
by Tabatha Yeatts, posted with permission.
Ready to be inspired by color? Leave your poem in the comments. I will update this post throughout the day.
Writer's block is kombu green,
or maybe white, or in between,
with a dash of crumple
wadded up in a bin,
and just enough room
for your brain to get in.
by Tabatha Yeatts, posted with permission.
Ready to be inspired by color? Leave your poem in the comments. I will update this post throughout the day.
Reluctant to dive in? Read some of this week's colorful poems:
Day 5: Aloe, Bronze Mist, Zinc (Featuring Margaret Simon's poem "Annunciation" from her beautiful book Illuminate.)
Later today, I will post the amazing Diane (Random Noodling) Mayr's poem using ALL of this week's colors. It's a little risque, so you may want to come back when the kiddos aren't around. (That way, no one will ask why you're laughing hysterically. And you won't have to explain about the tassels.)
Along with Diane's poem, I'll post a list of next week's colors. Put your Jazzy dancing shoes on, and I'll see you later.
Up next...
Day 8: Peach Pearl Pantone ® 14-1419 |
Day 8: MeteoritePantone ® 19-4008 |
18 comments:
The images you build along with the story of a new marriage are beautiful. How the colors paint this poem with vivid clarity. I also just noticed, (I'm a little ditsy) that you typed the poem in the color of sugar coral.
I always thought meteorites were gray. I have to consider this change. I'll be back.
Diane, my print copy of Meteorite is more of a black hue. On screen, it's like a dark purplish brown.
Meteorite (A Play in One Act)
It is just after sunset, the sky darkens. Two ants stand at the entrance to their hill gazing upward.
From nearby, a loud "Plop."
YOUNGSTER
Daddy, Daddy!
A meteorite--it
fell from above!
FATHER
Where son?
YOUNGSTER
Over there, Daddy!
See it? It's
burning hot!
FATHER
Yes, my boy.
I see it. Stand back!
YOUNGSTER
Do you think it's
from a distant star,
or a faraway planet?
FATHER
Definitely a planet.
YOUNGSTER
Really? Which one?
FATHER
The planet Cow!
Diane Mayr, all rights reserved.
Film rights negotiable.
Oh, my. Is that what happened after the cow jumped over the moon? I'll add your poem to the post in the morning, Diane. Sweet dreams!
I am enamored of the two 'different' love poems in your post, wondering about that color name-sugar coral. Is it the brightness or the word 'sugar' that makes one think of love. How different the two relationships are. Your poem shows how those two newlyweds, like many, are still strangers, Laura. And the sweetness of the sugar, and the rhyme, so, well, sweet, Patricia. Diane, I'm going to bed with a big laugh. Your subtlety is masterful!
Happy Birthday to your brother!
Writer's block is kombu green,
or maybe white, or in between,
with a dash of crumple
wadded up in a bin,
and just enough room
for your brain to get in.
Oh, my, these are priceless. "I was all like, 'Eat of the fruit'" - this line cracks me up, don't ask me why. Maybe because it gives more than a glimpse of your character. Just love it.
And this project! "DIY Bali Hai" - yes!! I am a color swatch junkie and they don't give them out in Italy. I had my mom ship some from the states so I wouldn't go into withdrawal - true story.
I adore this project and these colors and these all poems. I know I'll be joining in at some point. I'm starting to feel Jazzy already...
Your Guavas poem is the best, most delicately balanced, richest thing I have read in weeks. Back later to take all this in...so excited (jazzed, even--MY color).
Oh, Hawaii and guavas! Didn't realize you went there for your honeymoon.
Very interesting poem, the "eat of the fruit" reminded me of Eve in the Garden of Eden. You're a temptress! Isn't sugar coral a gorgeous color?
What a fun project Laura! I love your Guava poem - was struck by the same allusion to temptation in the Garden of Eden as Jama. The last line: "thinking he could change the story" is perfect. (Hope he's given in to some temptations since them *grin*)
Laura's richly layered Guava took me from Eden to Gauguin and beyond--and yes sugar coral turned out to be a sexier color than anticipated :)
One of the best things about this poetry project so far is reading different responses to the same color.
I love this project and these poems. Like Jama, I thought of the garden of Eden when the bride persisted offering the guava to her groom. I'm intrigued by Monday's colors, and the wheels have started spinning. Thanks for sharing!
I'm sorry I missed the launch week, but I am SO in now! Thanks for posting the colors for the week ahead of time!
(You are giving me ideas for my NPM project!!"
Such a fun project and your Guava poem evoked such a juicy response to the color prompt. Love it!
Laura, I've finally gone back and read everything so far and, really, all I can say is wow... just wow. Your own writing is fabulous, and the creative energy that is flying around Author Amok is outstanding! Everyone who is participating is totally rising to the challenge. You are quite the inspiration!
Thanks, Michelle. Wow! I'm impressed that you went back and read all of the poems. I hope you'll drop in and join us when you can.
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