THE LAST FIFTH GRADE OF EMERSON ELEMENTARY

THE LAST FIFTH GRADE OF EMERSON ELEMENTARY
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Showing posts with label space poems. Show all posts
Showing posts with label space poems. Show all posts

Thursday, February 19, 2015

2015 Sound Poem Project Day 18: Mysterious Space Sounds

Yesterday was Day 18 of Author Amok's 2015 poem-a-day project. We are spending February writing in response to sounds.  

For a full description of the project and how to participate, please read this post. I hope you'll join us. I'll continue posting poems from Day 18 as they come in. I hope to have Day 19 up later this afternoon. Thanks to everyone who has sent in poems so far. We've written over 90 new poems already this month!

Our Day 18 prompt is a recording of space sounds. Thank you to Michelle Heidenrich Barnes for recommending this clip. Did anyone else spot a human face in Earth’s clouds (at 6:04)? If you did, you might want to look up the word pareidolia.


I’m sharing some of Mike Ratcliffe’s email about this sound, because I’m fascinated with how people move from prompt to idea to created object (poem).

Mike says, “Day 18's sounds really resonated with me. It struck a chord with my interests in philosophy and metaphysics.  Starting from vague notions about the music of the spheres (not to mention, remembering that, in Tolkien's Silmarillion, the earth is formed from the harmonious singing of the lesser gods), my research led me to Pythagoras, who theorized that the Sun, Moon, and planets each emit a unique tone based on their respective orbital revolutions.  Has science proven Pythagoras right?”

Musica Universalis
By Mike Ratcliffe

And could it be that we are music
emanating from the stars,
harmonies formed from the
immense monochord, sacred
octaves in a cosmic chant, the
universal hum, the celestial 
Om?

Michelle Heidenrich Barnes is contributing her first pantoum ever! Kudos, Michelle. This poem is an elegy for a friend of Michelle’s who died recently. You can read more at Michelle’s blog, where she has a post about the poem.

Night Whispers

Whispers from the shadowed night
Lonely winds of time and space
One more poem yet to write
Trapped in gravity's embrace

Lonely winds of time and space
Glowing embers, pulsing light
Trapped in gravity's embrace
Before the blackness turns to white

Glowing embers, pulsing light,
Like eyes behind a clouded face
Before the blackness turns to white
Before you find your resting place

Like eyes behind a clouded face
There's one more poem yet to write
Before you find your resting place
And whisper from the shadowed night.
© 2015 Michelle Heidenrich Barnes. All rights reserved.

Sometimes, when you’re taking on a large subject (e.g. The Universe), it helps to put it in a box. Using a form can help a poet contain difficult or vast subject matter. Margaret Simon has a SOLAR WIND acrostic for us.

Planetary Womb
By Margaret Simon

Space
Outer space of the gods
Listen to crystal glass singing
A swarm of bees
Rumble of waves
Wind blown currents
Into my limited schema of
Nature--true, wild,
Distant

Linda Baie’s poem considers some of the moral complexities of space exploration.

Lost – Them or Us?

Speaking loud,
beast or man,
are you lost?
Do we misunderstand
this outer space
of realms unknown,
interpreting sounds
of a different tone?
Humans here!
Pick up the phone!
We yearn to know
we’re not alone.

Linda Baie © All Rights Reserved

I like how Charles Waters’ poem integrates some of the science required to capture these sounds.

THE COSMIC ANTENNA
NASA’s space ears pick up our solar system
Sounding like the purring of winds
Whipping up parched dirt,
Fighter jets darting to their next mission,
Sea conches buzzing hidden messages.
These electromagnetic vibrations
Signify the heartbeat of our cosmos.

(c) Charles Waters 2015 all rights reserved.

I was intrigued by the name Miranda, borrowed from Shakespeare, as well as the quiet humming voice of the moon named Miranda in today's sound clip. This moon of Uranus has such an unusual appearance that scientists use unkind terms in their descriptions of Miranda. I've used some of these in the poem. (P.S. She’s one of five moons in Uranus’ family, so my title is a bit tongue in cheek.)

Sister Moon
By Laura Shovan

Miranda looks like she was pieced
from parts that never merged,
a lunar Frankenstein’s monster.
Ridges and valleys line her face
like mismatched patches
on a moth-eaten coat.
Even from a distance,
she’s labeled bizarre, deformed.
Why does she look so odd?
It’s the way Uranus squeezes her.
She can’t deny his gravitational pull,
but all that pinching and binding
makes her insides churn.
She boils below the surface,
the wrong kind of heat.
Her icy skin contorts, cracks.
Maybe a word escapes with wind.
Maybe a song.

Patricia VanAmburg stopped in today with a haiku and an exciting bit of space news, which you can read here: http://www.bbc.com/news/science-environment-31519875

Earthsong NASA
by Patricia VanAmburg

Galaxy Chirping
No average rite of spring

Mating calls from space

Here are all of the sound prompts for the third week of February. As promised, I included a couple of sounds from New Mexico:

Sunday, February 15


Video of Santa Fe's Cathedral Basilica of St. Francis of Assisi by my Albuquerque friend, Jennifer Lewis.

Monday, February 16
Quaking aspen. Read more about this sound here.

Laughing child

The sounds of space

Friday, February 20
Follow the link to choose your reptile.
You'll need to turn the volume high to hear this one.

If you'd like some poem-starters to wake up your muse, you'll find them at the bottom of this post. Drop in any time with a poem. I’ll continue to post your work throughout the month, no matter which sound you are writing in response to.

Would you like to read what we’ve written so far? Here are links to the week 2 poems. You can find links to the week 1 poems on all of these posts:

Sound of Waves Poems by Patricia VanAmburg, Diane Mayr, Linda Baie, Laura Shovan, Margaret Simon, and Charles Waters.

Bubbling Cauldron Poems by Diane Mayr, Charles Waters, Laura Shovan, and Buffy Silverman.

Fireworks Poems by Charles Waters, Diane Mayr, and Laura Shovan.

Classic Typewriter Sound Poems by Patricia VanAmburg, Diane Mayr, Charles Waters, Mike Ratcliffe, and Laura Shovan.

Mockingbird Poems by Linda Baie, Mike Ratcliffe, Laura Shovan, Charles Waters, and Margaret Simon.

Cape Eagle Owl Call Poems by Linda Baie, Patricia VanAmburg, Charles Waters, and Diane Mayr.

Male Woodcock Mating Call Poems by Diane Mayr, Patricia VanAmburg, Mike Ratcliffe, Laura Shovan, Linda Baie, and Charles Waters.


Wednesday, May 14, 2014

In Residence: Fibbing about Outer Space

Welcome back to Northfield Elementary School, where I am in residence this month.

(What does "in residence" mean? I explain it all in this post.)

On Monday, we looked at scientific third grade Fibonacci poems. Those poems were grounded here on Earth. But outer space is also part of science and nature.

Today, let's head to the stars with third grade Fibs. I love the scientific facts that Jay includes in  his poem.

Gravity
by Jay K.

Gs
pull.
Suction
releases.
Can be strong or weak.
Secures all of us to the ground.
There's not that much gravitational pull on the moon.
If there was no gravity, we would be floating around
     in outer space with no air.

From NASA
Lindsay starts in outer space, then returns us to Earth.

What Space Is
by Lindsay H.

Stars
Space
Planets
Galaxy
Comets and the Sun
Go away as I now wake up,
Many miles away from my planet where I live.

From NASA
Dylan uses onomatopoeia to think about the future of our world. Look how the last line of Dylan's poem adds an unexpected twist.

Robots
by Dylan

Clang
Crank
Robots
Everywhere
Robots rule the world
Robots are low on batteries

Check out what today's robots are capable of: 



Great job, third graders.

Thank you to the Northfield teachers and families for giving me permission to share the students poems! I will continue to post student poems until our Poets' Tea in June.

Sunday, May 15, 2011

The Mysterious Last Line

One of the most difficult things to teach young poets is the art of the turn.

It's a transitional point in the poem -- where the mood or the point the poet is making shifts, or a surprise takes the poem in an unexpected direction.

For many years, I've been using Stephanie Izarek's short poem, "Under the Sky Is" as an opening exercise for elementary school residencies. You can find the poem, with Izarek's article full of poetry-teaching tips, at Scholastic.

What makes this poem is the last line, "Under the rock there are things we can never see."

My classes and I spend a lot of time discussing this line. Most people will ignore the word "never" and pop an image under that rock. It's a neat trick of language and the mind. We see plankton, sand crabs or buried treasure.

With Izarek's poem as a guide, kids *get* this idea: leave the reader with someone to imagine, a little mystery or a surprise to take away from the poem.

Here are a few third grade poets from Northfield Elementary, where I am poetically residing this month. They did a great job picking up the pattern of repeats that Izarek uses in "Under the Sky Is."

I did  not see the last line in Meg's poem coming. The surprise ending made me laugh!

Who Is the Best
by Meg G.
Teacher: Ms. Taliano

There was once a bug.
Next to the bug was a frog.
Next to the frog was a dog.
Next to the dog was a person,
But who was the best
On the dance floor?

One of the things I like about this exercise is that it's open to a variety of interpretations. Check out Isaac's science-minded  poem.

In Space
by Isaac U.
Teacher: Ms. Hoge

Out in space there is a supernova.
Coming from the supernova is a meteor.
On the meteor is ice.
In the ice is a box.
In the box is the most mysterious leaf
You’ll ever see.

Food is a popular subject for student poems. See if you can guess where Brian is before the end of the poem.

Untitled
by Brian L.
Teacher: Ms. Taliano

It started with bread.
Next to the bread was a mountain of salad.
Next came an endless pool
Of macaroni and cheese.
Next came a trampoline-sized
Peperoni pizza.
But I just ate a ton of spaghetti
From this awesome buffet.

Wow. Brian is the master of descriptive adjectives.
More third grade poems and lessons to come. Thanks to the teachers, staff and families at Northfield ES for giving permission to share these poems.