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Showing posts with label kay weeks. Show all posts
Showing posts with label kay weeks. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 24, 2013

National Poetry Month 2013: Random Poetry Generators with Kay Weeks

Some days, I'm too wrapped up in teaching and parenting to make time for writing. But even when I'm short on time, I could "write" a poem. How? With a random poetry generator.

Poetry magnets from the Huffington Post.
Follow the link to an article is about a random
Williams Carlos Williams poem generator.
Random poetry generators are more for fun than they are for serious craft. However, sometimes poetry robots manage to create a line or an idea worth saving for later.

Poet Kay Weeks, who lives near me in historic Ellicott City, Maryland, tested out one such generator for us for today's visit to the TechnoVerse. Kay blogs poetry, travel and photography at A Walk into the Past.

Historic Ellicott City dates to pre-Colonial America.
I directed Kay to check out an old Author Amok post which includes a list of several such generators. Kay and I had an interesting email conversation about the poetry generators, which I've included in the post.

First, Kay wrote:


I looked up techno-poetry and found... instructions on using the computer to write a poem, or add bells and whistles. It made my jaw drop.

Poetry is not easy to write—it’s a craft and probably one of the most difficult. I do not think this use of the computer gets at feelings, but could be fun.
 
Then, Kay found that one of the generators actually worked for her! I wrote back to say:


"That's great, KayMy favorite line is 'never pull a moon.' That could be its own jumping off point for a poem."

Kay responded:


Thanks, Laura. I tried many combinations until I found one I liked.  

Kay's Twitter account photo!
And here is Kay's guest post:


I’ve written poetry since I was about ten years old, so using a techno-generator was a bit fearful (is that the word?) or, rather, foreign. My first thought was negative because the creative aspect of writing poetry—from nothing to something—is why I write, but mostly, the need to express a feeling, then share it with others for the connectivity that is so important to me. “Have you felt that? Then, we are not alone…or crazy!”


This short poem was created randomly using ThinkZone. At first I didn’t understand how it worked, but then, just relaxed and several poems appeared…I said “No” to myself, and kept trying until this one came up. 

Interestingly, it represents me. I have written about sun, gulls, love and/or resistance to it, and the moon. The first line, questioning, is perfect. My own poetry would be more logical, so I like random quality because it is NOT me, but I could probably benefit from being more NOT me at times.  The poem seems to be about control, or the lack of it. As far as the lads go, that line made me smile, then laugh out loud.  I have learned something by wiggling my toes in the techno-waters.

Where is the warm sun?
Never command a gull.
All lads desire old, warm sharks.
Never pull a moon.

by Kay Weeks, via ThinkZone's Random Poetry Generator


Thank you for sharing the poem and your beautiful photograph, Kay. Are those fancy tulips? They look almost like peonies.

Keith's ThinkZone is an awesome site to share with kids. There are sections for math, science and language tech-play. I can't wait to check out the gibberish generator.

Tomorrow, Baltimore poet Clarinda Harriss uses texting errors for poetic inspiration. Just thinking about some of the phone-fail typos I've made gets me laughing. Good thing my frenzy friends have a sense of human humor.

For now, here is a robot reciting random poetry:

Friday, March 30, 2012

Poetry Friday: Keeping a Senryu Journal

In the fall of 2010, when everyone else was complaining about Hurricane Irene as "the storm that wasn't," central Maryland was deluged.

I started following the blog of local poet Kay Weeks. Kay lives up the road from me in Old Ellicott City, where she observed a river flowing down Main Street. (Her Hurricane Irene series is here at her aptly named blog, A Walk into the Past. Old EC is a pre-revolutionary American mill-town. It was the terminus of the first 13 miles of track laid by the B & O Railroad.)
Lower Main Street, Ellicott City during Irene -- www.baltimoresun.com

Kay was journaling about her storm experience online with a combination of prose, little poems called senryu, and yummy illustrations by artist Margaret Scott. The result was something beyond a typical journal. The senryu highlighted Kay's experiences, providing bite-sized insights. The poems were small windows into how one person's life has universal moments that speak to what it means to be human.

Here are two of Kay's observations from the storm:

Irene rages on
but my two cats are sleeping.                      
How I want their ease!

August 28…Morning…No power!  
Talking to myself, cats, birds.
Buy ice, try to save food.
Wet towels scattered around.

A senryu, simply put, follows the form of haiku but focuses on human nature, rather than "capital n" Nature. They're known for being humorous or satiric, poking fun at human foibles, but modern senryu can be -- according to the Haiku Society of America -- "more like serious short poems in haiku form."


HSA also shares this pronunciation note:  "In Japanese, the word 'senryu' sounds like the English phrase 'send you' with a Spanish flipped-r in place of the d. For those unfamiliar with this sound, a three-syllable word, 'sen-ri-you' may be substituted in English, with the medial 'i' sound as diminished as possible."

Kay turned her satirical eye on herself again last fall, during a trip to Spain which was fraught with mishaps. They seem funny now. You can read the whole series, "Time Zones," here.

Kay hadn't event arrived at her destination yet when this happened (art by Margaret Scott):

Málaga

Arrive Málaga,
but luggage is in Frankfurt.
What more can happen?
But luggage is in Frankfurt...

Should not have asked that!
Deficit of Euros now
And I need a cab.

Finally, Kay was able to relax:

Costa del Sol sound –
Waves rolling into the shore:
Such gentle music.

No Luggage or Money

Recalling Wendy,
You have everything you need.”
Ocean, flowers, friends.

And this poem written to her cat.
The days come at me
like a series of rolling waves.
No time to miss you.

I've been swept away by Kay's senryu journals. The project would adapt well to the classroom. Here are some possibilities:

  • Field Trip Senryu Journal
  • Science Lab Senryu Journal
  • Book Senryu Journal (instead of a reading log)

If I were to do a Kay Weeks' style Senryu Journal now, it would have to be about my garden. I've been neglecting it for several years, and the gloves are finally back on.
This is what my raspberries should look like, according to gardeningmags.net-genie.co.uk

This week, I began weeding the raspberry patch. It's so overgrown with grass that my husband wanted to dig it up.

Yanking long, dead grass --
like pulling a mean girl's hair.
She's gone! Room to grow.

Keeping a Senryu Journal for a specific span of time (a trip, a project) is a manageable poetic habit. During National Poetry Month, I'll be looking at many writing rituals and habits -- munching while writing, listening to music, scheduling dedicated writing time, even strange habits of famous poets. Look for a new post every day, beginning April 1. Several Poetry Friday regulars will be chiming in about their writing rituals.

Today's host is my dear friend Heidi at My Juicy Little Universe, our last Poetry Friday before National Poetry Month!